Ritzusen, Vegeta's alt.

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Ritzusen, Vegeta's alt.

Post by Justin(R on Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:30 pm

Character's Name:Ritzusen
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Character's Race:Saiyan
Character's Gender:Male
Character's Starting Job: Protector
Rewards: +400 Zeni +10 Ki
Character's starting planet:Vegeta
How did you find us?:I'm a member.
Sample RP, 200-300 words long (Can be a old RP):Ritzusen smiled as he was throwing fists into the air. The vibrations
of his blows jerked him around and around. Right now, he was in the
slums of planet Vegeta. Where the real fighters are at. Not the elite
with great training, but the greatest fighters on the planet that had
drive, determination, and instinct. His brother Kijin looked onwards
towards the street. The warrior stepped slowly towards him, making his
boots clack on the pavement. They were saiyan boots of course and as of
now, they were expensive.


"What's wrong?" The saiyan asked with a curious face. After the
question was asked he turned his back to a brick wall. With one foot he
got on his toes and the other stayed flat. This would keep his balance
during his stance. Ritzusen still stared at him, barely blinking.

"I..I.. Just don't know," His brother stammered. He slapped his scarred hands on his head and shook.

"Don't know what?"

"If I should do it. If...If..."


"Spill it."

"There's a big tourney going on and now they think that they are the
best. So they found me on a training route and challenged me. If I
don't respond, then they said they'll drag me there." His voice and his
body was shaky as he sat upon the pavement.

"Really," The saiyan started, "Buji, do you know anything about this tournament?"

"Not much," The saiyan said. His voice was deep and rough. "Just that
they started the place years ago and now they want to expand."

"Well then. I guess they are out of line. Should we accept the
challenge and fight together?" Buji nodded and then a small grin came
upon his face. The saiyan cracked his knuckles and his neck.

"Thank you Ritzusen," Kijin said with a smile. Ritzusen helped his
brother up with an extension of his hand and a pull. The saiyan
brothers and their friend started into a run. This would be an
initiation into their flight towards the big tournament.

Word count:335
Character's Biography (optional):(This is long but here it goes!)

The history of Ritzusen written by his grandfather Prometheus and his father, Ritzusen Sr.

Planet Vegeta 500 years ago

It was a typical day on Vegeta. Scouters beeping,saiyans leaving for
assignments, and babies in their incubators. Two saiyans walked by
dressed in the typical saiyan suit. Armor,a scouter and shoes. Their
tails were wrapped around their waist as they walked with their heads
held high and their arms folded. They were in charge of all of the
babies inside the incubator. One sat down and checked the incubators.
"Ah," He said, "It seems we have a new one." He had a weird haircut
that looked like a messed up comb over. His accomplice stood beside him
and started to fit his scouter on. The pictures and designs whirled
around and then came to a halt.

"The power level is about 10,000," He said,"He's not low class but he could pass for a soldier.

"And what shall we name him?" The other saiyan asked.

"I really don't know Borukhan." The saiyan replied. The saiyan obviously Borukhan spun in his chair and started to think.

"Let's give him two names," Borukhan said,"One could be more human like
Jonathan and the other could be more saiyan like Zircon." His friend
nodded. "I'm glad you agree with me Wreck."He said. The two exited the
first room and walked into the room full of incubators. They inscribed
his name underneath the glass. As they left,Zircon opened his eyes. For
a few years there had been debate about whether they should send him
off to another planet or not. Borukhan and Wreck argued their points.

"But sir," Wreck started,"This could be your greatest warrior!"

"I don't care!" Said the king of planet Vegeta at that time,"Its either
death or he gets sent to another planet." Year after year of debate the
king got tired and let him stay on Vegeta. One morning when Zircon was
about five years old they put him in a room with about six Saibamen.

"Are you ready Zircon?" Borukhan asked. Zircon smiled.

"Yes I am." He replied. The Saibamen jumped at him out of nowhere.
Being smart,Zircon watched their movements. He had seen the first few
punches coming. Zircon grabbed their fists and crunched them with all
of his might. Then he shot an energy wave at them. After that he gained
all the strength he could muster and punched all of the with a
roundhouse hook.

"Impressive Zircon," Borukhan said,"You'll be of great service to the
king." Zircon smiled and then exited the room towards his bedroom where
he laid down on the bed.

Zircon was a kid that could not sleep for more than two hours. His mind
was filled with questions and curiosities about this planet and the
universe. He sat up in his bed and had his arms wrapped around his
knees rocking back and forth. Borukhan walked by and seen him sitting
up. "Lights out little man." He said turning off the light.

"Wait!" Zircon yelled. The saiyan turned around and entered the young boys room.

"What is it?" Borukhan asked.

"It's just that I have so many questions and it seems that the world
can only answer some of them," He started,"I have a question for
you,did you get your hair styled differently over the years?"

"Yes I did," Borukhan answered,"I just wanted my hair to grow out
instead of that ridiculous thing that I used to call a comb over." The
young saiyan smiled at Borukhan. Zircon was the closest thing that
Borukhan had to a son and Borukhan was the closest thing that Zircon
had to a father.

"I also wanted to ask another question." Zircon said.

"And what is that?" The adult saiyan asked.

"When will the king give me an assignment?" The young boy asked.

"I'll request one for tomorrow." Borukhan answered. Zircon smiled and
then laid back down in the bed. "Now go to sleep before you and I get
in trouble for staying up past curfew." The saiyan said. He turned the
lights back out and shut the door. Then, with his questions
answered,Zircon fell asleep. After what seemed like a few minutes to
the boy was morning time. A knock came at the door. Zircon opened it
and saw that it was Borukhan. "The king wanted me to tell you that you
now have an assignment and I'm coming with you." He said. The young boy
entered a state of shock and then jumped up and down.

"I can't wait to go on the trip there!" He yelled,"Where are we going?" He asked.

"To Guardost," He answered,"We've got to bring a few Felixes in because
they stole are goods. The mission is to retrieve the scouters and the
other items and take casualties that stand in our way." Zircon smiled
and followed Borukhan out of the door. He followed the saiyan into the
preparations room and watched as they were getting their scouters and
their armors fitted on. Once it was Zircon's turn the saiyans smiled.

"So the little one is going on a mission to eh?" He asked. They burst
out into laughter all across the room. Borukhan turned around and
grabbed one of them by the collar of his armor.

"Listen here punk," He said,"This kid is our future he could be ten
times stronger than you in the next year! So what I recommend for you
to do is show him some respect unless you want pick up your teeth off
of the ground." The saiyans were frightened by his threat and gave him
his armor and scouter without a word. Zircon smiled at his close friend.

"Thanks for standing up for me." He said.

"No problem," Borukhan answered,"They need to show more respect to
everyone else anyways." They walked into their space pods and sat down.
Borukhan was used to this feeling but Zircon wasn't. He twisted and
turned in his pod until he was too tired to move. Soon the space pods
were in motion and off to planet Guardost.

Within a few hours he and his close friend Borukhan were there at
Guardost. "I see why the king assigned us here,"The saiyan said,"It's
so beautiful. I hope he lets us take this planet over." The two made a
crash landing. The leather seats were made to protect them from the
impact. Soon the doors slid open. A few steps extended out for the two
saiyans to walk on. They walked onto the bright green grass and looked
up into the sky. "It's red," Borukhan said,"Just like planet Vegeta's."
Zircon had so much excitement built up in him that he wanted to talk
all day. But he knew he had a mission and was going to try and talk
about more important things until the job was done. After a few miles
of walking the elite and the soldier were near their destination.

"Is that the building up there?" Zircon asked. His partner nodded and
pressed the on button on his scouter. He turned towards his friend.

"40,000!" He yelled,"That's high!" Zircon and Borukhan flew towards the
building with great speed and in a matter of seconds they were there.
"Turn your scouter on," Borukhan said,"You need to be able to sense
something coming at you." Just then Zircon's scouter started beeping.

"Looks like we've found them!" He yelled. The young boy turned to where
the arrow on his scouter was pointing and had seen his first Felix.
"Time for me to break that long nose of yours." He said cocking his
fist back. He unleashed a hard punch that surprised the Felix.

"Your such a little thing and you have so much power in your punch,"
The Felix said,"How about I introduce my self,I'm Ninyha, the Felix who
will kill you!" After his sentence was finished he shot an energy wave
at the two saiyans. Zircon sidestepped the wave as well as Borukhan.

"That was pretty powerful," He said reading the indications on his
scouter,"Now let me show you what I've got." The young boy rushed in
with his fists and feet flying. After a few seconds the Felix was
bruised and bloody. The long nosed creature picked it's self up holding
it's face.

"I thought I would have to do this," Ninyha started,"Reinforcements!" A
crowd of 10 to twenty men surrounded the two saiyans. "10 of us 2 of
you," He said,"You all are no match!"

The two saiyans were out numbered but they weren't going to give up
yet. They smiled at each other and charged at the Felixes. After an
onslaught of attack the two saiyans were covered in blood. "We made it
look like a bomb was in here." Borukhan said. the two flew into the air
and walked into a factory full of Felixes shipping their scouters off.
"Hey!"The saiyan yelled,"Everybody stop working and give us back our
scouters. If you don't cooperate with us we will harm you." At first
there was silence. Then a daring Felix started to laugh. Zircon shot an
energy wave at him.

"We're not playing!" He yelled,"Give us the scouters!" The Felixes
looked at each other. After that,they charged. "Foolish move!" The
young boy yelled he threw a flurry of punches and kicks and then
finished it off with an energy wave.

"Maybe next time they'll listen." The saiyan said. Borukhan grabbed his
communication device and put it inside of his ear. "We have the
scouters at the factory," He said,"We're just waiting on you all to get
them." After about ten minutes, a large cargo ship landed near the
factory. "Time to load these bad boys up." Borukhan said. It did not
take but a few minutes for the saiyans to return their scouters and
other equipment back to base.

20 years later...

Zircon was still in his same room for all of his life. Though the bed
was a bit small for him at times it was still a great place for him to
walk down memory lane. Soon a messenger walked to the door. "The king
has sent you on an assignment," He said,"He wants you to go on this
newer planet that they just built and quickly destroy it. If you don't
planet Vegeta will be at risk!" Zircon smiled. He walked out towards
his space pod and got inside. After twenty years of assignments a small
discomfort inside of a space pod doesn't seem like much. Soon the pod
went right out of orbit. The heat started flare up and sweat started to
drip off of his head. Soon it was out of orbit. After awhile he
wondered what planet he was going to land on. Then he soon realized the
horrible truth. "Those coordinates lead to the sun!" He screamed. His
space pod slammed towards the fiery hot surface.

Joanie

Not much is known about Joanie and she doesn't know much about herself.
But one thing she can remember was finding her future husband near
death. She grabbed him and took him home to take care of him. Over the
years they explained to each other their culture. Soon they had a son
named Prometheus.

Prometheus' life was normal until his dad left him. "Why would you do
this to your wife and son?" Joanie asked with tears in her eyes. He
quickly turned around and left to go to another family. As he left
Prometheus tried to follow him out of the door.

"Daddy," He said,"Where are you going?" He did not answer and simply
flew away. That night the young saiyan realized how much he hated his
father. But he moved on. After awhile Prometheus had to get a job
because his mother was not able to support him. The young saiyan
decided to do what he did best,fight. It was a Saturday night when he
applied for his job. All seemed normal until screams of terror were
heard.

"What the heck?" The man at the desk said. He stood up and then started
to walk outside. He ran back in and looked back out as if something
were chasing him. "Oh shoot!" He yelled,"There's an eighteen armed
monster!" Prometheus walked outside and then looked up at him.

"There's not going to be anything stopping him." He said. But then the
saiyan/Konatsa-jin thought for a second or two. "Maybe we can stall him
until the doctors come up with an antidote." Prometheus said. He ran to
the store and brought out many paintball guns. "This should tick him
off." The young man said. He ran and handed everyone he could see a
gun. Then they just started to shoot. After minutes and minutes the
doctor came out with an antidote. Once he injected it the monster fell
to the ground in agony and shrunk. Many people wanted to get a piece of
him and then Prometheus yelled,"I've got it!" The people did not argue
and let him grab the man. He flew into the air and took him into an
alley. He threw him down with great authority. "You could've killed
us!"The mixed breed said.

"Please don't hurt me!" The man yelled. Prometheus had an ear to ear
grin on his face. He put his fist into his hand and started punching.
"What are you doing?" The man asked. The Konatsa-Jin warrior then
punched the man in the face. His teeth went flying and blood was
dripping everywhere. The saiyan smiled again.

"How about a second punch?" He asked.

"Nooo!" The man yelled. Prometheus then punched him in the face. The man was soon out cold.

"I sure pack a mean punch," The saiyan said,"I'm going to go back to
get a job." Once he got there he was given the job and still is fighter
today fighting many tough opponents. After this,nothing much happened.

Later, Prometheus had a son named Ritzusen. He would go on to have 3
kids with the love of his life, Grayson. Their names were Kijin,
Ritzusen, and Kia. Ritzusen Sr. is now missing and is rumored to be on
Earth. Ritzusen and his brother are in search as we speak.

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Re: Ritzusen, Vegeta's alt.

Post by Taku on Thu Apr 22, 2010 5:34 pm

Approved. Since you already know the deal, one of the other admins will create your wiki.

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Post by Krillin on Mon May 10, 2010 8:27 pm

http://ultimatepride.wetpaint.com/page/Ritzusen

^ There's your wiki page, you should know the drill, this being your second character.

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