Baki Ookami DONE AT LAST!

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Baki Ookami DONE AT LAST!

Post by Baki on Fri Mar 26, 2010 6:51 am

Character's Name:Baki
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Character's Race:Sayian
Character's Gender: Male
Character's Starting Job: Pick one of the following...

Protector - Fighters that have come to respect life and sanctity, these fighters believe in upholding the laws and order. They are highly rewarded by the planet for their services.
Rewards: 400 Zeni, +10 Endurance

Character's starting planet:Earth
How did you find us?: Neversaga and friend advertised on DBU CB
Sample RP, 200-300 words long (Can be a old RP):
Baki slipped on his boots and at once jumped and kicked into the sky, flying and deciding to visit the cities he had once protected. He wondered if he would be remembered as the hero he once use to be, after stopping several robberies, a serial killer and a few super powered villains. Baki ran across the mansion given to him by the mayor hidden and in plain view above a common hilltop overlooking the entire city. “Steel city…” Baki gasped his eyes looked on the sparkling white buildings of the city. The city was a wonder in the day and decided to visit the Sin city. Baki was in sin city in a matter of minutes, though darkness spread over the city as soon as Baki had gotten there. It was nighttime and Baki noted the dark colored buildings. The grey and red bricked houses and the dark paned windows of office buildings with owners who worked with connections to various mobs, the buildings where it happened. “AhI remember…” Baki said coming across the corner of grand street and park avenue.

Park avenue known by the locals was known as crime alley, the number one street where drug pushers, cartel members, prostitutes and muggers were to be found. It wasn’t always bad, in fact sin city use to be a clean, healthy city just like steel city. The mayor, use to be Baki’s adoptive father. His mother, was an district attorney. The name scandal followed their professional lives yet they were in love. The mayor single handedly spent more time and money training the once proud police officers of sin city into catching the most wanted of criminals while his mother prosecuted them and sent nearly all of them to either the asylum or the penitentiary. Her record of over 5,000 convicted criminals sent to jail and only 1,000 sent to an insane asylum is outstanding as most criminals plead mental insane. Yet only she was able to determine the real mentally diseased with the sane “It was on a dark night like this…” Baki hissed. A prostitute passed Baki, her golden hair locked in girls and too much make-up, brought from the dollar store slapped onto her face. Her name was Mia, yet her street name was goldie. She hated her job as much as one could ever hate anything but she couldn’t leave. She had become pregnant in high school and her boyfriend abandoned her, her parents disowned her. At the age of sixteen she was kicked out the house and was left starving in the streets. That is, until Dwayne came. Dwayne was called “lil wayne” by his “girls” and gave Goldie a home and filled her belly with food. All he asked was for enternal servitude and subordination and Mia, The poor girl that she was signed the pact with the devil and this began her cycle of abuse, neglect, starvation and servitude.

“Looking for a good time?” Goldie asked Baki, Baki shook his head. “You shouldn’t be working like this, it’s wrong. Come with me to a nice warm house and free yourself of…” Goldie walked off. “Sorry spud my boy Wayne will beat me if he sees me talking to any of them “good guy” type of guys but mister…” She turned to reveal a tearful face. “Thanks..for caring”. She walked off into the darkness of the night, forever a slave to her work.

Baki felt the chill of night spill down his spine. His eyes watered as the wind blew into them and looking down he could see the very spot very it happened where he was truly born into his holy war against evil. The end of his innocence ended in this very spot. He felt the scene happen all before him again.

Character's Biography (optional):
Baki was born on planet Vegita, his father was the master general of the sayian elite corps. Baki's father thought of Baki as week being born with a mere power level of ten while his brothers all varied in the fifty to three hundred zone. Baki's father felt emberassed and ashamed of Baki and sent him to Earth. To punish his wife, Baki's father killed her for bearing and giving birth to such a week son and left even more hatred on Baki, blaming him for the death of his beloved. Baki's brother's shared their hatred and vowed to kill the Sayian when he has grown yet forget their promises in the years to come. Meanwhile, Baki grew up on earth, adoptived by a rich father and mother. Each loved Baki, it was on a day they walked home from "The One" featuring Jet Li that the greatest tradgedy in Baki's life happens. While imatating the martial arts in the movie, he bumps into a man with a gun. The gunman wanted his mother's pearls that hung around her neck. Baki's adoptive father moved in the way of the gunman and killed his adoptive father. Baki's adoptive mother soon followed, her pearls scattered on the streets of park avenue. Baki was left alive, with his childhood ended at the age of eight. He was sent to live with Master Roshi, who was a friend of Baki's father after years of cycling the globe and learning diffrent fighting techniques. Baki has now reached a point where he has come to declare war on evil and begin a holy crusade of justice on the foul streets that killed his parents.

(i know history sounds sort of familur right?"
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Re: Baki Ookami DONE AT LAST!

Post by Baki on Sat Mar 27, 2010 6:50 am

okay i have completed my app. Is it approved?
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Re: Baki Ookami DONE AT LAST!

Post by Taku on Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:03 am

You are approved Saiyan version of BatMan. Now you have to wait for your wiki to be done. In the meantime you are free to RP and do mission on the planet you chose to start on.

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Post by Krillin on Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:29 am

http://ultimatepride.wetpaint.com/page/Baki+Ookami

Welcome Baki, above is your wiki page. This page is for you to edit your character profile, you are to edit in your updated stats, items and so on when your update is approved first.

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Re: Baki Ookami DONE AT LAST!

Post by Baki on Sat Mar 27, 2010 7:30 am

thanks ^_^, I plan on being an active member and have fun time on the forum.
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